Hyper-Shadow-Death's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[AC vs JC Trailer Part 1]

Few tips

Your drawings look pretty good uncolored. But You need to definately add some color then shading on top. As for your trailer I like seeing your graphics but hated seeming them fade in and out at probably what 12 or 10 fps? First thing you gotta do is add in a much higher fps. Most people use 24 or 30. I use 30 when I use sprites and 24 for mouse drawn movies. Also when you make trailers you wanna have a catchy song and a little bit of story in it. I saw no plot and J-pop isn't exactly going to make 90% of newgrounds wanna watch this. Just words of advice for you, I know you can improve you got potential.

Edorisuke responds:

Thank you your advice is very helpful.

[StickDudeKillingArena4:Ex]

Smooth, Cut clean and Sick

Beautiful job on this one. Your fps was at a nice high rate, all your tweens were precise and accurate, music suited your flash well and the killing was enjoyable to a high degree. Animation 10/10 , I know alot of people look down on artists using sticks these days but if you can pull off animation in such a manner it shouldn't matter its only saving you about 500 more hours but not drawing out a full body every frame whether it is tweened or fbfed. Great job, but I would like to know did you happen to use both tweening and fbf styles in your stick combat animations or purely tweens? Regardless Great job, keep it up man!

mexipino responds:

Yeah, most of the animation is done using FBF, but I combine tweens with them as well. Thanks for your review!

[Naruto Vs Neji Shippuden]

Hey good stuff

For a first flash this is great. You made good use of the as3 vcam, but you gotta watch when its disproportionate to your original screen size because it'll add width to your characters to make them look fatter, especially on the close ups. Good use of sounds as well. There were a few where It blew my ears off when Naruto summons like 20 of his copy images, you gotta watch not to over clip sound effects. You can turn them down in the effects panel in flash. Good use of sprites,only words of advice here are to line up your movie clip sprites a little closer to eachother so they dont bounce around too much. Next to that you did an amazing job as a beginning, Props man. And keep it up!

rpg-gamer-1992 responds:

thanks alot. ya this was like experimental. so i'm gonna work harder on my next ones. and i think compared to some of the stuff i've seen on ng...my sprites don't bounce around so much compared to some people:P

[ChronoTrigger 1.5 (Spoof)]

You got potential

I use sprites myself right now so I know how it is with animating them. Good use of a high fps, and sprite useage plus sounds. Just make your videos longer like your first spoof and you got something good there.

globep responds:

Thanks , Hyper-Shadow-Death !

[Bose Earbuds]

there is no animation here

you used fraps to capture a horrible round of the very first level in the classic mario game, this isn't considered a movie as much as it is gameplay....

kanamomashouse responds:

GO SUCK A COCK! NICE JOB OF STATING THE OBVIOUS!

[The big heads episode 1]

ehh

Your going to get reemed by everyone on this site thats older than you which 99.9% of the population, flash was ok, graphics were ok, plot was nothing special but If you wanna prevent your score from dropping I suggest you get some older voice actors or use texts, no one likes hearing the high pitched sounds of a 13 year old child unless hes really funny. Just some feedback for ya.

oldlyshapedchris responds:

thanks :D

[Whuttevvah 9]

Haha

Most random video ever, but thats the point right

Glunnator responds:

Ptahaha, I do believe W/E 8 was more random than this ;)
But yes, the point is actually for me to animate whatever I want to animate whenever I want to animate it, as better seen in the earlier episodes. This one just rambled on into a story, as many people has suggested to me. =)

Thanks for reviewing W/E 9 ^-^

[Xmans Pivot Compilation]

Now that my type of tween action!

Beautiful nice high frame rates I saw there in combination with quick smooth tweening action sucked me into wanting to watch the whole movie. You tween just just like I do :P Great usage of your camera angles. Stick body movement was precise with physics like dbz really show your talent in this movie. Amazing compilation if I might say. Only thing your lacking is sound effects but I know that would take away from the art of the music in the background so I know what you tried to achieve here. One of my favs, and your getting my 5! Superb job man, I wanna see more from you in the future!

xman456 responds:

thx and you will see more of me

[MyPhilosophicalQuestion1]

Everything isnt the same...

Good concept at least your thinking deep. But we are all not the same because every human life form has its own soul, Neutral (Grey), Light (white) or Dark (Black). Each soul determines the individuality of a person and therefore we are all different and unique in our own ways. As for big bang theory if your looking for a scientific answer then you could believe that and if your looking for a spiritual answer then you could say it was all the Creator's doing. Regardless of what you want to believe no answer on this site will give you a concrete proven answer... It's in what you believe through your subjective perspective you've attained in this lifetime.

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Ye I know, the real truth is a lot harder to discover than we believe but all I am trying to do is find my own truth and something to stick with provided it makes logical sense to me. I like your last line and totally agree with that. Its our perception that ultimately makes us evade the truth to its fullest extent. By the way, have you got a book or something that you could recommend that goes over the theory of neutral, light, black and the soul stuff, its sounds very interesting.

[SDL- Axen Vs. Aurelio]

This is exactly what I love watching

Great job man. Your intro was epic, the music matches the setting, your storyline is well plotted, your animations are smooth, nice fps used im guessing 24 or 27? and your fighting scenes have many camera angles trapped the viewer into a requiem of excitement! Great job keep it Up! i wanna see more

Alamus responds:

Actually only 18 fps.