Hyper-Shadow-Death's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[AYAN - outcast part 1]

Nice idea

Nice little short you have here, great orchestra music to suit your theme and intensity. The thing I loved most about this short was your use of detail on the background had to be photoshoped for that type of work! Great job keep it going!

[ninja awesome yeah :P]

Getting there

Your stick animations have improved. I saw nice fluidity when you animated the grey ninja stick and the black ones were kinda choppy, to reduce the choppy effect try to animate your fbf's closer together when moving onto the next frame, theres many tutorials on youtube.com if you want to see it done first hand, next to that Your getting better, tips for next time: use more sound effects, color your backgrounds, music was good I like atreyu myself, Increase your FPS to 24 or 30, tighten your fbf actions more closer together to increase fluidity, add some blood effects. You got potential you'll soon be making fluid flashes I know it. Keep er goin man!

[Goku SSJ5 vs Mario]

Not too shabby

Your clearly new to flash but your heading in the right direction with how to animate sprites. Using Super Smash bros Z as an example is a perfect way to increase your flash capabilities I've done a bit of their type of work as well to increase my sprite animations. overall you did a decently entertaining job, Id like to see your skill improve more with your next movie.
Good sounds, decent music ( gotta love DMC3) , camera work was ok but needs improvement. The single sprite background was used well for being the only one. Effects of blasts and fire were nicely animated into their movie clip and other than that nice job man , keep it up!

[Bleach HitsugayavsIchigo]

Nicely done bro

I liked your use of anime style fighting here. Your work has improved alot throughout and movie and I give you props for increasing your animating vision on how sick scenes should really look like. One thing that got me was your use of camera work, for 2008 that is impressive in nowadays times of 2009 is just considered mediocre but I liked how you were ahead of the times when you submitted this great job! Nice use of sounds effects although the audio and mp3 quality couldve been higher im sure you know how to publish a movie with full flash audio quality nowadays. Nice blood graphics as well not many sprite authors like to do this but you did. Where did you happen to get your sprite backgrounds from, id like to use some of those in my movies.

OLD293 responds:

SpriteDatabase, it came from one of the Naruto games for Game Boy Advance I think.

[Turbo Sonic transformatio]

Great job here!

I liked how you lip synced, and did the side effects of the super saiyan levels. Nice job on this one and use of camera work!

[Sonic vs shadow part 3]

Great job!

First off, great use of sprites and your vision as an artist. Your camera angles and pans really added to your movie, at first I thought it was going to be mediocre but then I kept watching and your action really pulled me in! Nice job on this fight! One question, where do you get your sound effects from?

[Warsaw]

Bardzo dobra praca za pierwszym razem

This being your first movie made kinda shocks me. you had beautiful drawings for a beginner in making flash movies. Let alone your story set Warsaw perfectly, I've been since im part polish myself :P . Anyways tips to improve
1) Use a preloader, go to newgrounds download section they have some
2) make a scene selection screen ( if you wanna get serious)
3) add in sound effects to jazz up your movie
4) have a little more movement frame by frame wise
other than that good job. you impressed me and i've been doing this for 7 years! Keep it Up!

Hashii responds:

Thank You for adwices :) I make riplay on the end but it isn't work :( I will try to correct this.

[HUMPTY...]

Strangely Beautiful

Your music set your mood right away, good choice. But your art in the beginning scenery is what caught my eye. I loved the way your portrayed your art and shades by using varieties of colors ranging from bright to dark. And with the symbolism of a gun being the way out gave this movie a more modern real to what society is really like these days. 5/5 9/10 I would only request you make this a little longer but great flash overall.
Great graphics,
Good plot,
Perfect choice of music,
Nice variety of shading.
Great job keep it up!